time_fox

It flows very nicely which for me at least is one of the harder things to do in a poem. The rhyming is awesome too. It's not forced like I ...

Well, so far this is just ordinary life of any teenage. Try a paragraph form. Just for me it's easier to fallow. The beginning is really weird and I didn't ...

I really like this. Coming from a big back round with the military, I know they really like a small thank you. I'm kind of surprised I didn't see more ...

You need to explain things more. Your writing style is good but through this whole thing I kept going, huh? You really need to explain things a little better. I ...

This is really good. The person above caught the mistakes I found so I wont repeat them. The emotion in this story is good, but there is something in this ...

A way not to give very much out at one time is foreshadowing. This is just a hint to whats coming up next and it will keep your reader interested. ...

I just love to write. I can have different ideas come out in different ways. You are only limited by what you set your limits too.

Putting something off that you should do until the last minute. Why do I have over 50 pens?

I tend too go with super nature side of stories. So I have written a few stories on vampires and werewolves, also about demons, a fox demon, and now about ...

Eaten hamburgers that were, too hot so grab some hot sauce...

1) Have an idea. You can't write a story if you have no idea whats its going to be about. I personally like writing down the main conflict first so ...

Being able to just role with an idea. Even if it doesn't make any sense at all I will take what I have just written and I will form it ...

You know your a writer when you can be given some random topics and make them into a song, story, etc... You know your a writer when you get caught ...

For the most part I liked. Like everyone else has said it's rushed, and also werewolves and vampires are used way too often. So try to use something that no ...

Well, Anna Graham got all the things I was going to say for the grammar. Put a little more sensory images in your story. All I have really read is ...