time_fox

Well, sometimes for me a chapter ends when you have finishes a complete thought. Sort of like, when you write and the thought comes to a close, and you cannot ...

Over all it is good. Now, it really didn't get my attention so in the end I just shimmed over it. If this is more focused on teens you should ...

This is really good. You portray a good emotion in this song. What would I do? I would break down and cry. I would like to hear some music to ...

Hahahaha, this is awesome. It doesn't rhyme but oh well. This is really funny and good. "The weather is a-cooling, Halloween is round the bend, Zombies hang from ev’ry house ...

This is really cool. It sort of reminds me of some of my friends. What made you want to come up with song? Once I'd be lost without you To ...

I guess it would depend on the story. I normally write in third person limited, but I have been trying to write stories in first person. I think that writing ...

What's your favorite qoute? and Why? I have a couple but here is one, "Misa shut up or I will kick you." L from death note. I like this because ...

Well, I don't want to ramble about spelling mistakes. Everyone else got to do that. It's a nice and simple poem. Simple but yet has a very good meaning behind ...

I like it for the most part. I think it would be more for little kids then for young adults like are selves.

Thank you. ^^ Oh, and I fixed those little errors. Sorry about that.

Not a bad idea at all. It's very confusing thought. You are rushing everything and it is hard to keep up with it. Go back and explain things a little ...

I have seen a lot of different writing styles that I never thought of before. Also I have gotten a lot of my questions about writing, and about different topics ...

I was looking for a site that I could post up my stories, and that I could also get feedback on them. So I went on to google and searched ...

Haha, that's really funny. ^_^ How did you come up with something like this? It almost sounds more like a rap then a poem, but it's still really funny. ^_^ ...

Well, the story line sounds interesting. First of all this "Besides the fact that I was about to get ran over and that the driver would get hurt more than ...