time8keeper

I agree with Ermixon on all the points he/she brought up. There are a lot of sentences that appear sort of flat. By using more descriptive and strong words you ...

This is a picture I took on a photo shoot of a dried rose :P It's called Poison Endings. ~time8keeper

If you enjoy fantasy, Graceling by Kristin Cashore would be amazing for you. It's got a little bit of everything in it. I recently read it (after my sister forced ...

I like the idea of this story. It's not just another story about some kid being a hero all the time, it's showing a darker side, which is pretty cool. ...

All I can say is: "Wow." It's crazy how much feeling is put into this poem. I can feel the pain of the girl, just as I can see her ...

Thanks for the reviews! Yeah, I see what you're saying about the all the 'remembers.' When I wrote this that was the general rhythm of the poem: for 'remember' to ...

This is a poem I wrote on September 11th, 2008 in remembrance of September 11th, 2001 9/11, Remember Remember the plane, crashing in Remember the crumbling towers and the din ...

It's really good! It's very descriptive, but it didn't detract from the story that much, and after all, it's the beginning, and in the beginning, a lot of affairs need ...

I really like this poem, it's very deep and meaningful. Something's getting in the way. I can see the clouds hiding the sun, transforming the light, the day. Those three ...

Hi! I'm time8keeper, but you can call me any variation of that you can think of :P I'm 13 and I'm a girl. I've been attempting to write works of ...