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Hey ultraviolet! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate you taking the time to write these! :) Thanks!! :D ~time8keeper

Hey ultraviolet! Thanks for another amazing review! :D The stuff about his parents and Claralynn, well, I'll just say that all will be revealed in due time! :P Thanks for ...

Hey Day! Thanks for your review! This is a story that you really have to read in order, in my opinion, especially when it comes to this particular chapter. Sooo ...

Your nit picking is much appreciated! And I'm so glad you like it! :D ~time8keeper

Hey, Tiffany! Ahhhhh, thank you so much! Your review was extremely helpful! I don't even know how I overlooked a lot of those conjunction issues! I do start a lot ...

Hey, Tiffany! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! This chapter is due for an editing as well as the two before it. Actually, the whole story needs some fixing ...

Hey, Megsug! Thanks for this review! It really is helpful! I have a lot to work out still in this story, I just need to put the time into it. ...

Hey, PaperNessa! Thanks for the review! :D I know what you mean! Actually, about one minute ago I finished editing this so it's a lot clearer for the moment, I ...

Hey, ElementalBlood! Thanks for the review! As I told Kafkaescence, the sudden rebellion will be explained later on, throughout the story. I really just have to work with this story ...

Hey, Kafkaescence! Thank you SOOO much for your review! It was very thorough and helpful :) Your impression of this is correct, which is definitely comforting. At least I'm getting ...

Hey, Megsug! First off, thank you SO much for the review! It was really helpful! "Tornadoes terrify me. Rain repulses me. But most of all, blood is my blight." Thanks ...

So, first off, I definitely enjoyed this. You've definitely got talent in the writing area! I like science fiction and apocalypse stories in general, so this definitely piqued my interest, ...

Chapter Five Coren: Age 10 It takes me ten minutes to realize where I’m running too. The suburban sidewalk is leading me straight to Claralynn’s house. My best and only ...

*Author's Note* This has been edited 1/22/11, thanks to epic reviews! :D Thanks! Chapter Four Coren: Age Ten “Coren, just go to bed!” mother raises her voice. She isn’t happy. ...

*Author's Note* This has been edited 1/22/11 Chapter Three The Enemy: Age Ten The night is young. The child’s parents are discussing therapy again. As if therapy will rid Coren ...