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Well as I said in my 2nd post of this topic, most of that is all just bits and pieces I want in the book. So pretty much for a ...

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Chapter Six- What the Voice Said Ah, yes, chapter six. This is, and has always been, my least favorite LoSLoR chapter, hands down. Really? I found this to be the ...

As with the last chapters no complaints.... onto 6

This chapter is pretty muvh the 1st chapter you describe like mental but as I said in my pm reply i like the way you just describe but you didnt ...

Not really a review just want to say after reading half of the second chapter I actually felt excited to continue and there is only one writer currently who can ...

It is a love story but that's not the plot at all. I was going in the unrequited love direction. I know what you mean about the Underworld thing though. ...

ok read the end and i can already tell the plot apologies if im wrong "they fall in love, bla bla, she gets killed bla bla and he goes off ...

Only two royal vampires were allowed to be Awake at one time. i read and liked what i was reading up till here. sounds far too much like underworld with ...

I will also not i don't plan for the prologue to be all in that order except for the whole first bit. I mean I pretty much used the rest ...

I started this book like 3 months ago but I havent written anymore since... should I continue? Prologue "Tall? Thats what you want? It to be tall?" "Sure why not?" ...

btw I just saw on your thing you are 13? What I read in those 2 chapters kept my attention longer than half the books mum brings home written by ...

A) It went really fast. Maybe you could have her thinking about her situation or something as she walks, before she sees the guy. Maybe something about when her father ...

Ok so a little back story I wrote this in nz in 07 and I've read it 5 times, hasn't been professionally edited only edited by my bestie and the ...