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Re: A Boy Named "He"
That was really amazing! I love not only the beautiful way you conveyed everything, but the uniqueness of the idea. This is a truly impressive poem for which I will ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: the walrus sings at midnight
Ok, wow! I loved it! It reminded me of a fairytale, what with the whimsical-ness and the merryment, and the animals doing stuff they shouldn't logically be able to do! ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: A Little Creepy Poem
Awesome poem! I loved it!!! I don't know much about the formatting/rythm/whatever else there is of a poem (and by that I mean I know nothing :wink: ). However, I ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Childs play part two point five
LOVED it!!! I think this is my favorite part of the story so far, probably because I can relate to the whole "never even had a best friend" thing. I ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Child's play part 2
AWESOME!!! I think it even topped the first part. ^^ Your writing style is just plain enviable it's so good! I absolutely loved the cutting scene. Just the right amount ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
Okay, wow! Really, just wow! That was fantastic! I was sucked into the story at the very beginning. This was brilliant! I must say, I am liking this Priyesh guy. ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Hey! Just one of the many newbies!
Well, I like to wrie pretty much anything, but I especially love anything with a fairytale element. (Urban) fantasy and adventure are the runners up. My favorite movies are Garden ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: You Never Wanted This: a Retelling of Sleeping Beauty
Thank you guys so much! I totally realize the whole abruptness and unclear motivations of the first part, and perhaps I'll go back and fix it someday. For the most ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Hey! Just one of the many newbies!
Sure! The group sounds fun! :wink: And yeah, the reviews here are definitely more thorough than over at fanfiction. I was looking over some reviews for other stories here and ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: You Never Wanted This: a Retelling of Sleeping Beauty
So this is essentially just an experiment with writing in 2nd person. This is the first time I've ever tried it, but I think it turned out pretty good (for ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Saddest Book
Some of the saddest books I've read have already been mentioned (The Book Thief, I am the Messenger, Bridge to Terabithia, and some others), but my top three saddest haven't ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Forever dead
Okay, I'm just going to say it even though it seems like an extremely vast understatement: I loved it! I think this is the best death sequence I have ever ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Hey! Just one of the many newbies!
Hey! My name's Becki and (obviously) I'm new here. I found out about this site from WriYe (which I heard about from NaNo) and thought it sounded really cool. It ...
Jan 3, 2010