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I do have to agree with Timmy on the fact that it is a bit of a mess, but unlike him I think that the messy quality might add a ...

... Ohhh, I get it now. That's extremely cool! :D Great idea!

... There's a riddle? :thud: *is extremely unobservant* Well, now I'm off to search for what, with my stupid riddle-inept brain, will undoubtedly be hours to find the riddle and ...

Like everyone else, I really, really enjoyed this! I thought it was a great message that you conveyed beautifully. It's hard to pick, but I think this is my favorite ...

I think you're off to a good start. I only say a good start, though, because to me, that's all this is (and I swear I'm not trying to be ...

This was amazing! It was so sweet and beautiful, and I didn't catch any mistakes other than the nitpicky stuff that's already been mentioned. I just really loved it, especially ...

This rocked!!! I really loved it and enjoyed reading it (as did my friend who is screaming at me to say how great it is)! This strongly reminded me of ...

I do believe I like this better than your other poem. Armageddon is more my style ^^. However, I do agree with Flemzo on some points. There were quite a ...

I think you're off to a really good start! The story and the imagery you have are awesome, but you have a few grammar mistakes, like in a couple of ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Now, onto your poem. I really, really liked it! I can totally relate to this and I think you described everything really well. Personally, ...

Amazing poem! I really, really loved this! It actually reminded me a bit of myself, which inevitably made me like it more! I love the make-up metaphor in it, which ...

This is so beautiful! I really loved it, and the fact that roses are my favorite flower just made me love it all the more! The stanza about the black ...

Okay, this really made me laugh. I particularly loved the last line. Awesomely hilarious. It really reminded me of some of the (very) short stories I had to read at ...

Awesome poem! I think its really cool that you would be able to write something that good about pancakes. It's also kind of insane, at least in my opinion, that ...

First of all, I really liked it, but it does need some work. I agree with Empress; you really did have to sacrifice a lot to make it rhyme. Personally, ...