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Thank you both for the comments. ^^

This is just something I wrote for creative writing. I had fun writing it, and my friends thought it was funny so I figured I'd post it. I hope you ...

Scratched and Broken Record ~ I was staring at a blank doc – the one that was supposed to be filled with words for Am. Lit. – and feeling like ...

First off, I really liked this poem. I really liked the angry tone of it, and really it was just awesome. So all I have are nitpicks and not really ...

Thank you all for commenting! @Georgiexx: I'll definitely try to expand on the first sentence a little and add the James Dean glossy eyes thing. ^^ @ASH1397: I'll definitely try ...

This is for jDawn's Inspiration contest. It's based (loosely) off the song Speechless by Lady Gaga. It's very short, and I think it's a little too cliche. Any suggestions on ...

A/N: So I was flipping through the channels the other day and heard Hannah Montana (ew) singing If We Were a Movie and got this idea. I'm not to sure ...

This was fantastic! It was so sad, I seriously started to tear up. I haven't heard the original song, so I can't say if it's a good parody or not, ...

Hey Harper! I'm Becki! Welcome to YWS! I'm going to go ahead and say that NaNo counts, as I've never finished a novel outside NaNo either. ^^ Who knows, though? ...

I really liked this. I can't think of much in the way of critique other than what's been said. I definitely enjoyed it, though! I loved the ending (it made ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Tigress, and I'll be reviewing your story today (clearly :wink: )! I'm going to do the whole "quote the whole thing and write my comments ...

I really enjoyed this! The ending definitely had to be my favorite part, just because it's so sad that after hearing all that he'd just walk away. And while I ...

Thanks for reviewing and I'm happy you enjoyed it! I'll definitely fix the "minute" thing. It seems almost redundant and I'm surprised I didn't catch it while editing. I also ...

I really like your writing style. You have some beautiful sentences there! However, I agree with sillyducky that the tenses are a bit messed up and that it's confusing. As ...

I really liked this! The parallel between their thoughts was nice, and I liked the formatting you used where the POV switched every paragraph. At points the parallel between their ...