tigerwolf4

This is the introduction for my novel which will probably be about twenty chapters. BlackHeart is to be the first in the DARKSIDE trilogy. Please let me know what you ...

I really liked what you wrote. Your title was very eye catching. The repetition in the begining, "I used to think he was beautiful," really got me curious and wanting ...

I thought the second part of the chapter was awesome. Becareful about run-on sentences. Some of your sentneces are too long or too wordy and it is hard for the ...