tigershark17

This is very good; however, you could add a lot more to it. Instead of telling us in the spoiler that she has been poisoned, why not add it into ...

WOw; how fast did you write this? Really try to pay attention to end marks, commas, etc... And make sure you include all the words you want to say. Sometimes ...

Yeah, you're welcome. Yes, I am homeschooled, but no dif in the time thing. I still get up at five during the school year, and seven during the summer. I ...

Thanks mike!

WOw; this was amazing! Very sad, but it just dripped with raw emotion. I love stories like this. Excellent job!!

If you like suspense at all, Dee Henderson has a couple great series. Also Unwind by Neal Shusterman, and Host by Stephanie Meyers.

Hey Has anyone seen Donnie Darko? If so, what did you think?

absolutely. PM me anytime. I am online about 20/7, so you can always catch me. (:

Stori!

oooh, creepy. One question: what is prising? Well, great job! I love this one too, not surprisingly! Haunting is still my favorite though! Keep writing; I want more!

Another good one! Though Haunting is better, in my humble opinion. Only one thing I saw: after you say "hills that shine like diamonds in" you should delete the comma. ...

Hey! Great to have you on the site! You FINISHED a novel?!!! *gasp* Awesome! Well, welcome to YWS!

Hey Ceely! I love the beach too; can't get enough! Anyway, hi, and welcome to YWS!!! (:

Hey rabbit! Good to meet you! Welcome to YWS! I know you'll love it here; everyone is really nice, and the site is great. Anyway, welcome! Feel free to PM ...

Dangit! You can't like it more than once! ):