tigershark17

Hey First off, I just wanted to say, I am so glad you didn't use pinctuation! I don't use it in mine either, and got a lot of people telling ...

Well, I think Jabberhut took care of all the picky stuff, and that's all I saw too. Otherwise, good job! I really like this poem; it's so sweet. Keep writing! ...

Hey boss! I use the six traits system to review, which just basically means I list the six traits and what I thought of your writing for each, and then ...

Hey! So, I am using the six traits thing again. I used this on your first chapter, so if you're totally lost because you haven't read my other review yet, ...

Hey! Okay, so I review using the six traits writing system, meaning I'll list the six traits, what I thought about your story for each of them, and then I'll ...

Wow! Okay, I review based on the six trait writing system, so I'll list the six things, tell you what I thought, and then give you a rating on each ...

Hey Lizzie So, I rate based on the six traits writing system, which basically means that I grade you on six different things (see below), and for each you also ...

Hey! Well, I read the entire thing and reviewed it, but then when I went to save it, it disappeared. I'm pretty good with computers, so I am hoping I ...

Thanks, Calli! They are 15, 16, 17, and 15. Is there a such thing as like, I don't know, underage clubs or something?

Okay, I think I am posting this in the right forum. I need some help with a scene. My character has just won an ice skating competition, and her mom ...

Well, the average chapter length is about ten pages, and standard manuscript form is 1" margins on all sides. However, like Unicorn said, focus on the story first. Don't worry ...

Hey! You don't have to only post completed works. I don't know if you've noticed yet, but most of YWS is actually things people haven't finished. Just saying... (: I ...

Ooh! I'm first, I'm first, I'm first! I don't have too much to say about this one actually. You held my attention well; as always, I loved it! I am ...

Ideas: great! I loved this story. Sweet and sad, and although you hear stories like this a lot, you had a unique way of telling it that really kept me ...

Hmmm... very interesting. I liked the beginning; it was a good lead in. Your details were excellent in most places, and you did a good job of showing, not telling. ...