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Re: Keeper Prologue
This is AWESOME!!! I loved the beginning; it really drew me in. Your plot kept me reading right until the very end. Your voice was excellent: very unique and passionate, ...
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Re: Ubiquitous Introductions
Hi! Hi, hi, hi! I'm first, yay! Welcome to YWS! You'll find that we're all pretty crazy and friendly here, and though the site is huge, you'll make friends quickly, ...
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Re: Hello, my name is Taptoe :D
Hey taptoe! How ya doing? Welcome to YWS, and I hope you like it! (but I'm pretty sure you will) (:
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Hey, I'm new and would love to know more people on here:)
Heeeyyyyy.... it's me again. I'm stalking you! (Just kidding) (: Are you addicted yet? Oh yes, and please do post Pyrroella. Please, please, please??? Ha, I'm such a nut. Anyway, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Hi
Hey Lady of the Letters! Nice to meet you! Nice avvie, by the way. WElcome to YWS!
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: A Growing Catastrophe
WOw. Nice surprise ending there. That really threw me for a loop. Please post the next bit soon, so I can read! I really like this so far, very interesting. ...
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Re: Expressive Liquour
Hmmm.... intriguing.... *wiggles brows* This was a very interesting poem. Very different, and it had a really unique style. One mispelled word in the beginning, and please don't write things ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Lead.
Wow. This is a very different and unique poem, but I really liked it! I really like the fact that you don't use much punctuation. Cour'se, I'm biased; I don't ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Lost In Mortality
Whoa. OKay, I am now a little obsessed with your writing. This is cool! I mean, hey, I know it's just a little thing based on your avvie, but man, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Squirrel and the Fly- A Fable
Yeah, it was awesome! But I have it now, and it's really starting to fill up!
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
Awesome! I'm really starting to love poetry after reading some of these works. This is great. It doesn't seem that vague to me, so yeah, good job on that. Anyways, ...
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Re: Kidnapping
Wowee! This is so amazing! I love this poem so much. It seems so raw and full of dark emotion... Very descriptive and full of energy... Great job; I love ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Posies
This is great! I love that it's to your English teacher, by the way. A lot of teachers seem to judge all kids based on sterotypes, and it's really annoying. ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Adolescent Anguish
Wow, I really feel this poem. I have felt like this many times, and in fact, still do. This did an excellent job of conveying the feelings of an unloved ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Illusions
Wow! I can literally feel the emotion dripping off this poem! This is amazing! The rhyming was good, the flow was good, the word choice was excellent. I loved it! ...
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