tigershark17

This is a really intriguing poem. It is written like a letter, which makes it different but very interesting to read. Anyway, I didn't really see any nitpicks, so great ...

Yes, I did try to like it more than once, seriously. I would have given it like ten. So ten gold stars for you! And I know what you mean ...

Ranger51, This is awesome! Okay, so I review with the six traits system, so basically I tell you what I thought about your writing for each trait, and then give ...

Whoa! Wasn't quite prepared for that ending! OKay, well, let's get started. I review using the six traits system, so basically I will list the six traits and how well ...

Oops, sorry; forgot to give you a score for conventions. That would be a 5. Good job (again) TS

Hey! I started my review for part tow before this, so if you don't get the whold six traits thing, go look at that one first. Ideas: Clear, focused, compelling, ...

I will review: Novels: fantasy sci-fi romantic Short Stories: fantasy sci-fi romantic general and anything in the "other" section. Also, I will review anything under "Advanced Critiques". Just ask me!

Me! Pick me, pick me! *waves hand excitedly* Can you review Hidden Illusions chapter one in Romantic Novels? Thanks!!! TS

Can you review Hidden Illusions chapter one for me in Romantic Novels? Thanks! TS

Hey there! I like the first poem better. The descriptions are great, your wording is fantastic. As for the second poem: Reflecting are my imperfections this line seems a little ...

Thanks guys! I will edit soon (when review day is over). And chapter two is coming!

Ooooh! i love your vocabulary! Your words literally create pictures in my mind. This is such a great poem! Great job, and keep writing!

Wow! That's heavy stuff. I love it though. You have a choppy style, but you've definitely been able to use that to your advantage. Great job on that! Love your ...

Serious grammatical errrors. They are very distracting. HOwever, that being said, this is an excellent idea so far, and if you work a bit at showing rather than telling, it ...

This is great! Just like your prologue, I sincerely enjoyed this. I hope you finish it someday. It has a serious potential for being published. Really. All it needs is ...