tigershark17

Thanks guys! In answer to your question, preachergirl: that would be telling! But if you really want to know, you can pm me (:

Swearing and some graphic violence in this chapter The air was so dark Melanie could barely see three feet from the tree house. She looked around. “Hey,” a voice said. ...

Has anyone ever done the STP, or known anyone who has done it?

Your detailed descriptions were what caught me most. You created vivid mental pictures with your words, so great job on that. I liked the part you snuck in about the ...

Stori: in a good or bad way?

Wow guys! Thank you so much for the comments! I had no idea this would help or be liked so much!!!

As usual, all comments welcome. In addition, title suggestions would be much appreciated, even if it is something simple or obvious. Thanks! (: The silver blade slides slowly along my ...

Please read spoiler before reading this post. To anyone who reads this letter and has not been a cutter: this is not meant to offend anyone. I am not trying ...

Yeah, me too! I settled on the arcade though; it fit the story better. Thanks guys!!!

Thanks so much, you guys! That is amazingly helpful!! (:

Haven't seen it yet; that's why I was asking.

Thanks so much, Ziggie! I will edit soon

Very good. Dark, but I loved it. Good voice, intriguing and compelling, and held my interest. The story idea was very good, and kept me reading right to the end. ...

Wowee! I can't believe there's only one review! I don't have much to say; I didn't really see any mistakes. Nice imagery and detail, good flow and rhythm. I loved ...

This is great! Your detail is really really good. You literally created pictures in my mind as I read. Excellent job!