tigershark17

Hey Midnight! WElcome to YWS! I love cookies too, and awesome dancing pink elephants! Anyway, you'll have a lot of fun here; everyone is really nice and helpful, and though ...

Hey Rach Yeah, everyone here is really friendly. I'm a newbie too, so welcome, fellow newcomer! You'll love YWS!

Oh my gosh! A fellow Orwell fan! Well, I will have to follow you. Welcome to YWS, by the way. :)

Hey Luckypelt and Ceely I am pretty new here to, but I know you guys will love YWS. It's awesome! I have only been here for a week and I'm ...

Hey everyone! I just signed up on YWS about a week ago, and I think I am addicted! I have already racked up close to 1000 points for reviews and ...

Kirby is AWESOME!!!!!

How old do you have to be to compete? Is there a point at which you are too old?

Wow, that ending really shocked me! I love it though; the story was great!

Hey, I'm first! Awesome. And I also just realized you're only thirteen. Hope I wasn't too harsh. (:

Okay, nitpicks first. The concrete was darker than usual from the rush of water previously splashing against it and going into ditch. This sentence is begging for an article! He ...

Can you shadow if you're not planning on attending the school, though?

Excellent! Watch your end marks and commas, but there weren't to many issues. I loved this story! It was awesome when Heather dumped her drink on his girlfriend, and the ...

Excellent prologue! One of the best I have read on here. You gave info, but just enough to keep us on our toes waiting for more. Loved it! Let me ...

Great start, but I agree with mikepyro; it is too short. Are you going to add to this as a prologue, or use it as the blurb? Either one would ...

Wow! Very different and interesting. I think the scene where she walks in with a gun could be a little slower. Maybe add some detail about the other people in ...