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Re: The Haunting
WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! I think this just might be the best short story I have read here on YWS so far! And I have read many. This was ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Inkheart Series
I saw the movie and hated it. How's the book in comparison?
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
RoseyUnicorn: You have to read 1984! It is so good! Trust me, you won't regret it. Ooh, and Animal Farm, too. That one's amazing.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 2
OMG! Where is the third part? Hurry: write, write, write! I want more. (:
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 1
This is great! I love it, though I didn't think I would at first. I normally don't like stories like this, but you hooked me in! Great job on this; ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: In my Box
This is very interesting. It is different from other poetry I have read, but it says a lot. I really liked it! Capitalize the word Bible at the end, but ...
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Re: Molly McCoys
Awesome! This is hilarious, and so much fun. I love it!
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Piano's Joy
This is very cool! I always feel this way when I play a nice piano. I once played a two million dollar piano, and I couldn't believe the way it ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Cat poem
Haha! This is great! A few minor spelling errors: truley/truly, windowsil/windowsill, silloette/silhouette. That's about it. I really like the end too. You might want to capitalize the word "the" at ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Chapter one
Great start! I love the air of creepy mystery this has. Okay, a few minor nitpicks: In fact lately, whenever I close my eyes, it was the only thing I ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Longer paragraphs
Read "The Writer's Guide to Powerful Paragraphs by Victor Pellegrino. It will help you a lot!
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Ello.
Hey! I love animals and all the rest too! Do you have pets? And what's a gleek?
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Losing Myself in You
Hmmm... Well, I love it! I think you should really add more, though. The end feels kind of chopped of, you know? It would be awesome if you could finish ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Ello to anyone who cares
Hey! I care! I am a pianist too, and I also love music. Here are some artists you might like: David Lanz Ryan Stewart Hayley Westenra Anna Nalick Kevin Kern ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: just ire
I have severe anxiety issues too, social and otherwise. I love singing and piano, too! You are worthy of a follow, my friend. Seems we have a lot in common. ...
Jun 23, 2011
