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Re: Abortion
Abortion is wrong in any case. It is always murder. Killing a child is always wrong. It is scientifically correct to say that human life begins at the moment of ...
Mar 25, 2012 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 7
The stairs creaked and Melanie jumped up, locking the door again. She stood behind it, her heart threatening to leap out of her chest at any moment. The doorknob rattled. ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 6
Melanie sat and stared at the calendar hanging above her desk. Since getting home from Jordan’s three hours earlier, she hadn’t done anything but wait for Miranda’s email. At 1:00 ...
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions chapter 5
Riding to school with Jordan each morning was now becoming the norm; he never even asked her anymore, just assumed that they’d ride together, but never expected anything of her. ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Secrets - Chapter 3
You've got an excelent start going here. I love how she sudenly kisses him at the end, but it kind of messes it up to have her slap him. Might ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Oh duh... yes *scary* Thanks for the review! (:
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Hope
I know this is a longer poem than most I've seen here. If you don't want to read it then don't, but please dont' spend your review time telling me ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Open Up for Me
Oh, wow. I was really really touched by this poem; it is so deep. You did such a good job in the way you expressed the emotions of what you ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Behind all my smiles
A little repetetive, but overall I really REALLY love this poem. This describes me so much, and you are able to put into words really well what I imagine a ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 4
Melanie walked into the gym Friday night and headed straight for the front. Spotting Mark alone, she walked over and sat down by him. Brittaney appeared next to them a ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 3
Melanie sat in math class the next morning, watching the teacher’s green ink scrawl across the board. Something nudged her arm. Jordan held out a note, and she opened it. ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 3
Melanie sat in math class the next morning, watching the teacher’s green ink scrawl across the board. Something nudged her arm. Jordan held out a note, and she opened it. ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Mother
This is amazing. I can't even begin to tell you how much this poem spoke to me. I can feel your emotions pouring through your words into the reader... you ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Madness
Wow! I really felt this poem; this is really deep. I really enjoyed it!
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: Chat Room FAQ
Yeah, I'm getting the same thing, Stori. What's up?
Aug 23, 2011