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  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Abortion

    Abortion is wrong in any case. It is always murder. Killing a child is always wrong. It is scientifically correct to say that human life begins at the moment of ...

    Mar 25, 2012


  • The stairs creaked and Melanie jumped up, locking the door again. She stood behind it, her heart threatening to leap out of her chest at any moment. The doorknob rattled. ...

    Jan 3, 2012


  • Melanie sat and stared at the calendar hanging above her desk. Since getting home from Jordan’s three hours earlier, she hadn’t done anything but wait for Miranda’s email. At 1:00 ...

    Dec 28, 2011


  • Riding to school with Jordan each morning was now becoming the norm; he never even asked her anymore, just assumed that they’d ride together, but never expected anything of her. ...

    Dec 3, 2011

  • Romantic Novels
    Re: Secrets - Chapter 3

    You've got an excelent start going here. I love how she sudenly kisses him at the end, but it kind of messes it up to have her slap him. Might ...

    Nov 13, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Hope

    Oh duh... yes *scary* Thanks for the review! (:

    Nov 13, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Hope

    I know this is a longer poem than most I've seen here. If you don't want to read it then don't, but please dont' spend your review time telling me ...

    Nov 12, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Open Up for Me

    Oh, wow. I was really really touched by this poem; it is so deep. You did such a good job in the way you expressed the emotions of what you ...

    Nov 10, 2011


  • A little repetetive, but overall I really REALLY love this poem. This describes me so much, and you are able to put into words really well what I imagine a ...

    Nov 9, 2011


  • Melanie walked into the gym Friday night and headed straight for the front. Spotting Mark alone, she walked over and sat down by him. Brittaney appeared next to them a ...

    Nov 4, 2011


  • Melanie sat in math class the next morning, watching the teacher’s green ink scrawl across the board. Something nudged her arm. Jordan held out a note, and she opened it. ...

    Nov 2, 2011


  • Melanie sat in math class the next morning, watching the teacher’s green ink scrawl across the board. Something nudged her arm. Jordan held out a note, and she opened it. ...

    Nov 2, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Mother

    This is amazing. I can't even begin to tell you how much this poem spoke to me. I can feel your emotions pouring through your words into the reader... you ...

    Sep 30, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Madness

    Wow! I really felt this poem; this is really deep. I really enjoyed it!

    Sep 30, 2011

  • Information Desk Archive
    Re: Chat Room FAQ

    Yeah, I'm getting the same thing, Stori. What's up?

    Aug 23, 2011


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