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Re: I Am the Dreamer
Living in a state of freedom No restrictions or bars to hold me back A feeling of incomparable power Like an explosion leaving nothing intact Living in a state of ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Cursed
Wow...I have to say this is great. All the images that you used fit perfectly. You have a knack for imagery I see :D I loved the way it flowed ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Window Stalking
Can I be more pathetic? Like am really I’m doing this? I feel like a total stalker watching them but I can’t help it. a/n: I'm trying to get rid ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Failure
Hey jasminebells, I like this poem because of the imagery. I only have one critique and that would be in the first line Ever feel like you life was screwed? ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Ten Seconds
One Mississippi… Two Mississippi… Three Mississippi… I stand on the edge of the sidewalk, a clear view of the car ridden street. Brake lights cast red streaks onto a blank, ...
Aug 1, 2009
