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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Six

    thaks for reviewing, however I do fear that I got ahead of myself uploading when edits still could've been made

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Ghost

    Thank you for the feedback. I'd prefer to be honest and say that this story is more personal than the ones I usually share...therefore, the line you called redundant is ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Blown Away

    i wouldnt call this story weak at all, just not that organized

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 32

    Well, turns out I can't get the next chapter not to be terrible. Stay tuned longer!!!!!!!!

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 32

    and i needed to cope with stress, so i wrote more chapters to go back on what i said................................................chapter thirty-three coming soon to a yws near you

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Three

    thank you for the feedback. part four is already up if you'd like to read it.

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 31 *

    thanks for feedback...well, originally it was "yeah, Helmuts dead", but I decided that I kind of started pushing it with character deaths after Bailey's grandmother dead, and Mr. Tyler's siblings ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 30

    thanks for feedback. yeah, you're right, I don't have any experience actually talking to anyone with Alzheimer's. think I'll rework the Helmut character by basing him off of someone who ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 30

    thanks for the feedback. I think I'm going to put all your reviews in one document so I have them in one spot when I put together a real final ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Two

    well, I don't have any desires to murder anyone at the present moment...but thanks for your review, I'll tag you

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: count

    Thanks

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Gift of Life

    Thanks for reviewing!!

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 29

    also, I wanted to say thank you for all your reviews...I know how highly requested you are, so it means a ton to me...I don't mind criticism, I really don't, ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 29

    ah, don't worry about the award thing. I realize now I was just being petty and petulant. I don't think I would've realized that unless I made that blog though, ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Two

    Thanks for your review!! The mother wouldn't tell on his son because she loves him and doesn't want to see him go to jail, but it'd also be too late. ...

    Jan 31, 2016


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