tigeraye

i appreciate it, thanks.

Thanks for all honesty, I'm not too big on this chapter either...the idea was that Melissa did realize that something was wrong with her, and she knew what she was ...

my goal is to get the next two chapters up by monday if the weather doesn't ko the power, then that will more than likely be it until may or ...

I guess the description made this seem really boring x_x

By the way, Clockwork is the reason I left the genre as general instead of realistic, heheheh...I know it's not really feasible, I just thought it'd be a fun character ...

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ah, well I've read The Outsiders, but not The Outsider, sadly...I'm glad the cigarette thing was intentional, I love minor things like that added to the story...the location of France ...

thanks for your feedback :) I've started recording myself reading my writing after I finish, although the last chapter (29) I couldn't bring myself to do it, well, you'll see ...

sorry for the shortness of chapter, the next one is much longer. I've gotten a bit ahead of myself and want to upload the parts I've already written before moving ...

thank you for your review. I'll change the way Dr. Pam enters the scene.

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and funny you brought up the mommy thing, heheh...i originally had him call her maman but changed it back in a split second because i was like "oh gee, nobody ...

thanks for reviewing, i'll keep the comma stuff in mind...jean-luc's backstory will come into play sooner than later, i hope his lack of fluency in english makes sense then, if ...

and thanks for replying, by the way, I appreciate it...when people don't respond to my reviews even with a like I sort of just get the impression it wasn't wanted...