tiffanyann

Okay so this is just to correct grammatical errors and stuff like that because this is just the prologue and it's not really enough to build a solid critique on. ...

Hey there! Let me just say that this is the best piece that I've read today at YWS, if not of all time. It is very, very well written, to ...

First of all I'd just like to say that I'm not a really big fan of this genre but I actually liked this piece. That's saying something, especially reading it ...

Hello AngelKnight900! I haven't read other chapters of your novel but from what I've read of this chapter I get the impression that it is a good work. It presents ...

Wow! Congratulations! This is really good! For the first time ever I don't have any grammatical corrections to write. In fact, there are several aspects of this chapter that I ...

First of all, before I get into the load of corrections I have lined up, let me just say that this is a very good piece. What I liked most ...

Hi. I like your work so far-just minor corrections. Some are typos. The next morning Sam and the others asked Gina if they could have a packed lunch so they ...

Hi there! I read most of your work and noticed a lot of typos and spelling errors so I tried to correct them. His sister and his little brother were ...

Overall this is an average piece, some components are really great like the phrasing. I like the phrasing. There's only very few alterations that I have to suggest. original: How ...

I guess I can just say one big thank you to everyone for the replies or just ignore them but I don't want them to feel snobbed. So here goes. ...

This work is good from the very first sentence. It summmarizes almost everything and it's intering and encourages the reader to continue reading. For most people, they use the first ...

whoops! sorry about that ...must've pressed the wrong button. Anyway, what I was saying was that the writing was aiming to be traditional but it had some modern phrases. So.. ...

I get the feeling that this piece should have been sort of traditional but it' [quote]Whatever I think about the children, no matter how much I care about them, and ...

So I joined just a few days ago, hence the term relatively new. Everyone seems so freindly here. And welcoming too. :D I think I would love to be always ...

i want to scream amd shout and jump up and down. you just gotta love technology. it makes your dreams of writing stories that lots of people read. i love, ...