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Right. Lots of cliche fantasy is out there, but it all has some good aspect that allows the author to pull it off. Cliche plot can be overlooked often when ...

Thanks for the critique, it was quite helpful. I edited right away, as I don't know if the judging has begun, and I need to make sure this is all ...

MAJOR RE-WRITE! I decided this would be better in 1st person. How is it now?

We have to read a book called Three Cups of Tea for Civics . Civics? Making us read a full-fledged book ? This can't possibly end well.

I don't have to present this, but I'll edit the wordy sentences a bit. Thanks!

Just found another. The Hollow Kingdom . The author has an idea of how to describe characters, but it didn't work. This is what (s)he did, not a quote: Her ...

I didn't really find any issues with this that Blink missed. The pacing was good, Leo was well developed, and overall, nice work.

Hey, you guys finished yet? I think he did a good job on Eragon at least. Did you pay attention to the Star Wars discussion at all?

I can see this guy in a nice pastel dress shirt, with some cowboy boots, a pocket protector, thick spectacles (not glasses, spectacles), and a Batman retainer walking down the ...

This is so pathetic. He actually thinks that people find this cool. Grow up, moron.

Just found another one. Beyond the Summerland . It's in a series, and I couldn't take it. It was published in 2004, and the grammer is still horendous. Are they ...

The Iliad *Screams* I LOVE that book! How dare you insult it! Grr... Sorry. I just really enjoyed it.

Oh, dear. They should let you do a funny version, making fun of the book and everything. Maybe you could use some of those scenes from the begining of this ...

Because money is not God. Jesus said so many times in the Bible. But sorry about the wooden mallet thing. That must have hurt.

Money is God, you know. At least Paolini is familiar with that fact. Take that back or I beat you over the head with a wooden mallet.