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Wow! You've clearly made lots of progress already! Extensive editing is EXCELLENT. The publishing world is very scary, and it will be hard, but I'm sure that you'll be able ...

It's actually his last name. Oh, dear, I'm butchering the review-to-post challenge. I need to review.

I'm thinking to something like Caldwell, which I found on a baby names thing. Naming a villian after Nate is probably a bad idea. Just kidding. I just found that ...

I agree with what others have said, but one more detail: Remember that you aren't the only one being represented by this agent, and you aren't the only one requesting ...

I'll jump back in here and help out. These are just suggestions, so feel free to adjust them as you desire. Character 1... humble - Low self esteem? compassionate - ...

What! Eragon was pretty good, it's that Harry Potter poop (Poop as in I gotta keep this G rated) Can we please not go here? I can't stand Eragon and ...

Personally, I think that you should just go to a local computer store. The people who work there can usually look at what you'd do with your laptop, come up ...

After completely butchering NaNoWriMo with only 9,000 words, I have searched for a new way to get myself writing. And I have found it. And thus I bring you the ...

Ooh! I know! Use 1st person when you can, and when the viewpoint changes, use 3rd.

Time and time again, I see people using Wikipedia as a trustworthy source. Wikipedia has a lot of information - but the reason it's not necessarily the most credible source ...

It has to be long enough. I know, it's generic. But let me clarify: Just think of what you plan on happening in the chapter. Then just write all of ...

How quickly would a guy forgive if he knew something external was causing a person to act annoying? Guys will forgive pretty quickly, but if things repeat, then they get ...

Ah-lan. "Ah", as in, breathe out, and "lan", like "lawn".

This is one of those summaries that I'd expect to hear little girls saying "aww" at the end. It's interesting. My only concern is your ability to make it long ...

As long as you plan to catagorize it as a comedy, then yes, that would be cool. If you want to make this a non-comedy, high fantasy novel, then flush ...