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It sort of reminds me of "Heros". You did switch around enough things to make it work on your own, though, so this is quite good. Good luck!

Sounds interesting. I would say that you need to figure this out yourself, but here's a suggestion: Maybe the actor is in an opera where they use a real artifact, ...

When making the flaws, think of each trait as a double-edged sword. For example, he is courageous. However, maybe he is also untrusting.

OK, so I figured that because I am neglecting you all from reading any more of my novels until I finish the second draft, I figure I might as well ...

Sorry for the confusion. When I said that you should avoid being the next Christopher Paolini, I meant so because he basically got all of his ideas from Star Wars ...

Maybe, to prevent yourself from becoming the next Christopher Paolini, you could at least change the spyglass to something else. Wait...main villian is Amber...spyglass...I sware that I've heard the t

Every decision can have a great aftershock even when nothing makes sense. Which is the case with this synopsis. NOTHING MAKES SENSE. Sorry. That was harsh, but it's what I ...

Ooh, interesting. At the beginning, the proper word to use would be alchoholic, not drunk. Anyway, the only thing that I don't really think works is accidentaly handing in her ...

#51 is my favorite. Reminds me of another: 53) Always quote the entire post that you are responding to, even if it's completely unnessesary to quote them at all.

I don't know. I can never tell the difference between writer's block and just being lazy. I think it mostly happens when I stop writing in the middle of a ...

Choc, of the three songs I've written, two are going into the musical. The first is Up , which you critiqued recently, and Fly , which is going to be ...

The WWIII story isn't THAT complicated, you just kind of...made it seem that way. That dream you had was really cool. I wish I had dreams like that. Unfortunetly for ...

Erin Hunter is just a name three different women came up with to not confuse readers, and none of their names are Erin Hunter, there is Cherith Baldry, Kate Cary ...

Well, one, I feel like I have too many projects going at once, my new one being the fourth. On the other hand, I really want ot try something completely ...

We're all here to help. Just post it and you'll get plenty of feedback. If you need feedback on plot or something like that, you can post a synopsis here. ...