thunder_dude7

Later. Why is my computer so stinking slow?!?!?!?!?!

It's an interesting subject. Galatea, that's true. I really don't know what the exact difference is. Maybe, as Jiggity said, adults can comprehend children's way of thinking. Maybe it was ...

My back began to ache as I sat up *no comma* and *ommit the word "I" here* ran my hand through my knotty, unbrushed hair. I yawned, eying the board ...

LLS, sure, I'll do it. But you do realise that this is my thread, right? Saphire, I'm afraid I don't critique poetry. Sorry. :(

Hmm...I never really thought about that. I think that children's literature is different, and is rather nessesary. I wouldn't call it simpler, but it's different. Children and adults think differently

True, bubblewrapped. However, you could interpret that verse to mean a number of things. The way that makes most sense to me is that He thought that, becaue they could ...

Just finished it. As for paying me back, I'll update the first post in a few minutes on possibilities for that.

Hello, gryfalcon! Thanks for being my first customer! I'm thunder_dude7, and I'll be your critiquer today! Prolouge This was pretty good. Here are a few things that I didn't care ...

I'll probably do it and completely fail. I don't have much time in November.

I formulated a rythem, but it mut have been off, because it didn't work in some places. THe recording will fix that, I imagine. The rhyme scheme was...off. First, read ...

Very good. I really like this drawing. Most of this has already been said, but here's what I think: The forehead is a bit small. The hair behind the ears ...

...write whenever the story comes and try not to force yourself to write when you can't, or come up with deadlines, because then you'll just be worried about finishing instead ...

Let's see...I think that I'm best at dialouge, like you.

GRAND RE-OPENING! After I got mixed up with stuff, I ended up stopping critiquing stuff, so I ended up shutting down shop. However, I am now re-opening the shop for ...

Will you please stop annoying me while I eat my pizza?