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Wow that's pretty awesome, do you have a reference I can check out for that? Here you go

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Makes me think of something fantasy. I think it has something to do with three different objects or people who are in some way connected as one. Sounds pretty cool, ...

After the update, the song is definetly improved. I'd make the 2nd verse a smidge longer, though. Perhaps another stanza. Oh, and regarding the bridge, I disagree with Choco. I ...

Hi, June! Welecome to YWS! As the other greeters said, be sure to keep your ratio of reviews to pieces posted 2:1. Sorry, I have to say that for my ...

This is very good! You showed the emotion very well. Here are sosme parts I wasn't so crazy about: I can remember, The good times we had. I knew I ...

Well, I know very little about how the British government works. Most of this is probably completely wrong and groundless, so forgive me in advance... I think, seeing as the ...

That reminds me of a movie I heard about. This is kind of off topic, but it's called either "Lives for Sale" or just "For Sale". It didn't last long ...

I must admit, it makes me sad to hear you voted for David Cook. David A. (sorry, i dont think i can spell his name, no matter how many times ...

Guys, it's a joke. I'm not attacking Obama with this. I just counter arguments against McCaine. I just thought this was funny. Sure Dog's can tell when they're in bad ...

I'm American, so "defense." If I was English, Australian, or Canadian, it would be "defence." HAHAHAHAHA!!! Sorry. Defense is dumb. Defence is the better spelling because it's better.

Choc, of the three songs I've written, two are going into the musical. The first is Up , which you critiqued recently, and Fly , which is going to be ...

Well, the first link is horribly long, but I already know a few things about the issue. As I'm sure we all can agree, this is really, really bad. This ...

I'm sorry. I didn't mean just intercourse. My bad. why is this in a debate, it's not even that serious, seems better suited for blog or Romance writers group or ...