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Re: A story I am working on writing.
Ooh, interesting. At the beginning, the proper word to use would be alchoholic, not drunk. Anyway, the only thing that I don't really think works is accidentaly handing in her ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Top 250 Cities on YWS
I live in number X...which is pretty darn good, given that there are so many members on YWS...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: newbie!
Hi, Tiffers! Welecome to YWS! Obviously, you like rascal flatts. They're really good. Do you typically listen to country? Oh, and what genre do you write?
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: How to make reviewers hate you...
#51 is my favorite. Reminds me of another: 53) Always quote the entire post that you are responding to, even if it's completely unnessesary to quote them at all.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Kalli's Critique Call Center
Up! It's a lyric, and I want it to be awesome, seeing as it's going to be the main track of my musical.
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Hiya!
Hi, Andrilena! Welcome to YWS! Check out the Help and Support Section for rules and FAQs. We have a rule here that you review two pieces before posting your own ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Gun Laws
I agree with the reasons stated that banning guns is not going to effectively reduce crime. It's like saying that by taking away red icing, you'll stop people from putting ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Gun Laws
the death rate wasn't as high as it is now Neither was the general population, I imagine.
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Triple Point - Segment 1
Well, I didn't really find anything that zankoku_na_tenshi didn't catch. Nice work!
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Guess the name of the user above you!
David? Hobbies: Playing on the computer, writing, reading, swimming, singing, video games Eye color: Blue Hair color: Brown
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Writer's block smashed to pieces!
I don't know. I can never tell the difference between writer's block and just being lazy. I think it mostly happens when I stop writing in the middle of a ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: The Shredder
Sorry, Medusa, but I'm afraid I can't critique romantic fiction. Midnight, after I post this, I'm going to critique the first segment, take a break for an hour or so, ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
Ooh! He should read some romance novels! I don't care if he hurts THAT genre's reputation! Just, dear lord, no more butchered fantasy stories.
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: Summer Reading Recommendations
The Miricle Worker - William Gibson Iliad OR Oddessy - I forgot who they were by. I think his name was Poe or something. Eragon series - Christopher Paolini OK, ...
Jun 30, 2008 -
Re: The Shredder
Choco, done. Midnight, I have somewhere to go now. Expect it done some time tommorow or maybe late tonight.
Jun 29, 2008
