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My parents encourage me to improve and make my writing the best that it can be. That way; Best case scenario- I don't need another job. Worst case scenario- I ...

Hello, Christine. You can PM me as well, and I'm a sucker for fantasy. That's why I write it. My current story is actually in Action/Adventure, but no matter. You ...

Hello everybody! I'm glad to find a place to post some work of mine. I've already started on a story in the action/adventure thread called "The Elements". The chapter 2 ...

It's not a sequel, just another chapter. HUGE difference there. If each chapter was a book, Erin Hunter would have hundreds out there. That would be freaky.

Link to chapter 1 Thanks for your comments. I tried to think about them in this chapter. Chapter 2- The Beast and an Old Opponent “I won’t be able to ...

Woah...Thanks. I'd better get started on the next chapter soon!

1-Well, they all are 13, though the entire group of competitors may include some older people. These 4 particular people are all 13. PS The prolouge also gives a reason ...

Author's Corner: If you didn't read the prolouge, you might want to read it, but it isn't completely nessesary. Thank you to everybody who helped me with it. Here is ...

Well, I first actually wrote this story (Condensed into six chapters) two years ago for school. A few months ago I posted another idea for this story on another website, ...

That's not bad. I usually base whether or not I'll read a book by the illustration on the cover and the summary on the back. I would read this, it ...

In my developing story, the villain wants to kill off a race because a group of that race's fighters killed his brother. I don't think of a character as "Evil". ...

Prolouge A large figure dashed away from the six powerful warriors. He let a tear drop from his eye as his brother fell to the ground, dead. He continued on. ...

You skip around from past tense to present tense a bit, which you should fix. Other then that, this is very good.

Well, I'm not a fan of riming poetry, but this is fine. What exactly is this about? I don't understand.

My story is tied to Greek mythology, but set in present times. It also involves people with supernatural powers. There is no romance or sci-fi in it. Where does it ...