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((We play this game in theatre class all the time!)) Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about ...

((Alice, do you live in the UK of Canada or something where there are Es on the grading scale, or was that purely a joke?)) Granted! Unfortunetly, you make up ...

Unfortunetly they shared a room with muscular men who liked beating people up.

Granted, buyt it is illegal and you are arrested. I wish I had straight As but was not a nerd.

You made numorus grammatical errors. In order to improve, I reccomend typing everything(Instant messages, posts here, ect.) in word and spell checing it. Always look at the "Explain" option and ...

Granted, but the pool is closed and you are arested. I wish I got less homework from all of my teachers.

Many inexperienced writers say that they never using said. Why? English class. We are told to never use said. This only proves a point: You don't notice when somebody uses ...

This chapter begins going into people's character. Enjoy! As usual, you can check my portfolio for other chapters. Liat, Tor, Tenion, Viti, Crystal, and Cerulea stood in the crowd. These ...

I like all of the ideas. You should do all off them. But my favorite would have to be #1.

Unfortunetly, they then remembered that the kids were 1, 6, and 8, and therefore violated child labor laws.

Unfortunetly, the mother didn't have a job, leaving them no other way to make money for her three children.

I didn't swear. It was a spoiler, smartz. This week I...uh...wow...uh... Fine. I did nothing. I critiqued people at another writing website. That's it. *Sob* Well, I'll do more next ...

Unfortunetly, they had no life insurance and the families were left in horrible debt.

Unfortunetly, the families didn't like it and bought them coffins and had a ceremony ect.

unfortunetly, the abulence ran into the police car and they all died. ((I like this game))