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Done! Just to let you guys know, I'm on vacation. Right now, I'm at my grandparents' house, but soon, I will be going to the beach, where I will have ...

Hey! Thunder here, at your request! Alright, I think the other review handled the nitpicks, so I'll focus on the overall. First of all, the girl ordered a "space burger". ...

Here with the reivew you requested! Sirens filled the air, echoing off skyscrapers and ringing out through the city. Love it! Excelent opening. This was obviously a very serious thing. ...

"Hi Nate! You've done an awesome job. I was just wondering about one thing. When I go to the home page, and scroll down there's a link that says 'The ...

Done! Thanks for helping increase my review count!

Alright, let's review here. First things first, I really liked this. The main character's got attitude, which is always fun. Now, I'll start off with the big thing. This seems ...

Alright, so you need reviews and nobody is reading your stuff? Let's fix that! I can review absolutely anything. Yes, you heard me correctly. However, I do have specialties - ...

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I type. First of all, I can type over 60 words a minute, slightly slower when numbers come into the picture. I can't write on paper that fast, so I ...

Likelihood of you being FEMALE is 89% Likelihood of you being MALE is 11% It appears the baby name sites I visit to make character names were my demise. That ...

Order of the Pheonix left me really confused - both the book and the movie. So much new stuff going on, and it almost felt like JK Rowling thought "Oh, ...

I physically can't look at a white background - I get a headache. So both of them are painful for me to look at. Of the two of them, I ...

Honestly, you need to have both. Favoring one over the other simply doesn't work. It's like deciding between shooting an arrow harder or shooting closer to the center. Hmm...thinking about ...

Ed Mcmahon too? Oh my gosh... I heard of MJ first, as one would expect, him being the most well known. I heard about Farrah a couple hours ago, and ...

The process you have worked out is correct. Edit the crap out of your book before looking into an agent. The beginning of your novel is key - in order ...