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1/10. Sorry. Beyonce and Ashley Simpson killed you there. Keep You - Sugarland Hoping to Find - Kristy Lee Cook A Broken Wing - Martina McBride Born to Fly - ...

Dialogue is huge, naturally. Really focus on that. Disregard any and all thoughts of "talking heads". It's a script. We don't care about that. As for action, cut back on ...

I'd appreciate it if you review my new song, Shine.

Oh - like soul mates? That's so cool! 9.5/10 (Perfection is impossible)

I got some new music, so I figured I should play. Head on Straight - Tonic Things That Never Cross a Man's Mind - Kellie Pickler Not Tonight - Kirsty ...

My theater teacher this year. She's fun and a good person, but she can't direct theater. Or write. See, our first play was an ancient Egyptian transfer of power - ...

WE'RE OPEN, PEOPLE! Sorry. Yes, this is a bump. Yes, I'm trying to get some critiques for myself. See the main post for information.

Title? Hmm... "Who I'm Supposed To Be"? Anyway... This was actually very good! As usual, it's hard to find rhythm when you can't hear it, so I found a couple ...

After failing NaNoWriMo 2008 with only about 10k words, I hope for more success in 2009.

I came up with a line for a song yesterday, and today, I felt like making that one line into a song. And thus, I bring you "Shine". *** Just ...

My parents are going to let me start this whole myspace thing once I get through middle school. One question... All of my friends in real life are on facebook, ...

I really like the emotion here. Nice work on that. Your biggest problem in here is the rhythm. It took me a while to catch it. There are a couple ...

Preface - This really should be called a 'prologue'. Anyway... The grammar is shaky. Here's the exact text of your prologue, with fixed grammar. Can you change against your will? ...

In unsure situations, I assume the worst. So I freak when it comes to darkness. I'm not fond of heights, but I can stand them. Roller coasters scare me. I'm ...

That might be cool. I suppose I'll have to get a novel ready to go by the time I'm 18.