thunder_dude7

Alright...I'm stepping out. This is new to me, so...we'll see what happens. Hopefully I won't humiliate myself. Stanza 1 The final line has 1 too many syllables. I recommend taking ...

My own opinion? Put the novels in the advanced critique section. It's why I haven't gotten a lot of reviews - I'm picky about the title and it's "snag", I ...

Sometimes, it's frusterating, and sometimes, it works. The key is that the character shouldn't look like the biggest idiot on the planet. Also, it can't kill reader suspense.

Here's a basic guide to figuring out where your story goes: If it could have happened in the past, it's historical fiction. If it could happen now, see the next ...

Let's see... Well, if you say "you", you're wrong. If you say "me", you're wrong. On top of that, "me" would be grammatically wrong in the sentence. Therefore, the answer ...

Round 22: God vs. Satan Satan beats God over the head with his enormous bible that was written over 20 years, but God uses his awesomeness to resist and beats ...

Hello! I'm thunder, TD7, whatever you want to call me. I'll be you critic for the few minutes before another person jumps on board with reviewing this. First chapters can ...

We named our GPS direction thingy "Mildred" because it sounds like an English name and the thingy has an accent. We named my dad's car "Dora". Why? It's an explorer. ...

You basically brought the baby to life, you should take the responsibility to have the baby. This is my exact standpoint. It seems that some people would rather become killers ...

What do you critique? I can critique lyrics, fiction, scripts, and photography, with the following exceptions: -Horror -Romance/Chick lit -Fanfiction(depends, actually. Tell me what it's based on, and

I'm afraid that I will now have to transport you to the math hallway in my school, which is pale enough to be an insane asylum. *spots chainsaw* Never mind.

I usually say "ribbit"

I very much prefer happy endings. However, I always love it when there's a happy ending with lots of suspense before it. Therefore, I say Lydia's idea, but she survives. ...

YWS actually has a page for that: You can probably track down a magazine that works for you.

It's not thunder, but I'm happy with it. I always [s]celebrate[/s] drag myself through February, as it is my "bad book month", where I read bad books on purpose. The ...