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This story just keeps getting better and better!

Everything I would have had against this has been said already! I really enjoyed this. Some grammatical errors that have already been touched on. So really, all I have left ...

I am really enjoying reading this. If I was any good with editing, I would give a real review, but since I am not, I will give my humble opinion. ...

I'm going to agree with Tanya on this one, and ask why isn't Michael freaking out that he was rescued by the Asmor? Is it because they saved him? I ...

Mossyra, I believe everybody else took anything I would have had to say as in fixing it, but I really enjoyed it! Can't wait to read more!

I really like this beginning, prologue or not. It was really good. The philosophical take on it was amazing, but then again, I'm into philosophy. With that said, I think ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I am a big Shakespeare fan, and so of course I loved it. I can't write well in the old english, but you did a ...

This was really, really good! I was able to connect immediately with Cat. I've experienced that exact situation, okay, maybe slightly different, but that was really, really awesome. I love ...

I really, really liked this interpretation of Rapunzel. Its something I wouldn't have expected. Its good. Don't give up! I would love to continue reading this, if of course you ...

Personally, I really liked this beginning, the whole thing, sure there were a few confusing parts, and some grammatical errors, but i still think it was really good, and understood ...

Chapter One Writing in the corner of the bar was a young woman. She was shorter than average, maybe a little over five feet tall. She had brown hair that ...