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The writing style does lose flavor quickly, and is very overused. I definitely understand the lack of transition and consistency, and I'm glad you brought up my paragraph structure. Using ...

Thanks! I definitely understand the lack of flow and clarity. I'm glad to have a reviewer that asks why, cause that makes me ask why. Thanks again!

Thank you for the review! I definitely understand the issue with clarity. I've gotta do better with linking the events so that it makes sense to both the reader and ...