theyellowsmoke

[pre] The Movie of Darby Jane’s Life Chapter One The sprinklers are on, whirring with life, and Darby thinks about sprinting through, but he’s cutting across the park to save ...

On your next piece, maybe avoid the cliches. The message and the ending, it's all a bit much. Your heart's in the right place, but a story can illustrate a ...

I don't know if you mean for the character to sound so juvenile. I know fourteen isn't old, not at all, but it feels like she's acting the way fourteen-year-old ...