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Re: alone
You have the inspirtation; NOW GRAB IT! Write your heart out. Don't just do 2 lines. Write a whole freakin novel! :P That's my advice.
Jun 23, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 of "Thrills of Barcelona"
There isnt much to say except: Bloody gorgeous. If I get another one like this out of your I swear to god ill burst. You're amazing.. I am just so ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: A difficult dad
When I say I have a difficult dad, My Mum purses and gives me a frown. She says to me “You’ll be sorry, When he’s not alive or around” But ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Cross the Tide..
"Let's go somewhere the tide can take us there." Away from an industrious city Where no one exists like us- the witty. you sigh for an inspired song and I ...
Jun 8, 2008 -
Re: Summer 08
I'm sorry. I attempted to read it but just couldn't. Please please please edit it and NO CHAT SPEAK. Then a I shall review it.
Jun 5, 2008 - Re: Compilations of a Teenage Girl. Jun 1, 2008
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Re: Dear Mr. Publisher
Dear Mr. Publisher, I hope my plea isn’t in vain. Please find enclosed a manuscript, written in blue crayon. (Is the blue crayon random or something else? Honestly, I feel ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: I dream.
You don't really have much puncuationg here... you may want to work on that. Personally, I suck at that myself but you may want to contact Jabberhut. She'll set you ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Snow
I don't need to understand your poetyr. I HATE trying to decipher what someone else meant. I am far more content not giving my opinions on that if you don't ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: May I Have This Dance
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful work. All my other comments have already been declared through the mouths of others. 8/10
May 4, 2008 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
Jabbs, Jabbs, jabbs! Good to hear from you again! If you could review this: I would be more than pleased. You rock, Jabber! Uhmm.. it still has yet to be ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: May I Have This Dance
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful work. All my other comments have already been declared through the mouths of others. 8/10
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Ms. Apt Diagnosis
"That's perfectly fine, though! You need not get from the poem what I intended, in fact, I like that you say you get something else. As long as you feel/think ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: I want to Critique, (I give very long ones)
Post away! I would like to hear anything... But again; I would prefer poetry or short stories as that's my number one area. Uhmm.. what else do I have to ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Want a Crit?
It's a short story.. I have very few reviews and I posted about a week or so ago... i need all the help i can get with it as I'm ...
May 4, 2008