thewritingdoc

I can't tell you how many times I've come across writers who do what I call "Fake Writes". Well princess, I can't necessarily say I agree with that at all. ...

It's not a bad poem. I feel like you need more energy in it. That can come from using more metaphors, similies. Show me the story. Don't tell it. :)

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Eh, it's not bad. Some lines were a lot better than others and the ending was just ok for me. It's not bad, all in itself.

Hello! I'm Tamara. I was interested by your username so I thought I'd do some reviews for you. tired no chance of sleep good hook wired so that I cant ...

Hey ya ^^ I appreciate this short piece. It shows a good emotion and the sense of being scared to show your true self.. Like you're wearing a mask You ...

I so need more reviews on this :)

Hey there! I was wondering if you could review a short story I wrote? It's a bit rough around the edges story wise, but it's a pretty clean copy. i ...

I gotta tell ya - I went to review this and couldn't keep reading. I don't mean to be rude but I'm just giving my opinion - after the first ...

This was absolutely amazing. I had almost no trouble reading it and I could see this becoming the beginning of a novel or a follow up short story. For example, ...

Overall, I'd have to say it was pretty good. However, I got the sense that it was something torn out of the pages of a book, the last two pages ...

I agree greatly with Sakura. The title is a little bit plain. Even the name of the main character is sort of a cliche if you've ever heard of or ...

Hey RandomGrrl! I believe we've met before haha. :) Hypocrite You know something I can't stand? When pig-nosed hypocrites make faces at the wide world, stick thier tongues out, roll ...

Hehe, it's a really sweet piece. Some colorful word choice and nice use of grammar. Great story, made me chuckle. Really sweet ending too. You nailed it. 9/10

I think his name was Nolan, but I'm not sure. It was decades ago when such things were plainly ignored. But what from the mind fades, in the heart stays. ...