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Re: Fly
Hey! I'm Tennis. What a sweet little piece you have here! Let's get started. I wanna fly away I would use "I want to fly away" Same with every other ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: First Shakespearean Sonnet Attempt - No Title Yet
I think about how much time I have spent in sunlit shadow rooms, thinking well of you. Did I really live days buzzed on your scent? Flavour of worthlessness- please ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Maybe Skies Are Blue
Hi There! Here's your review: The oceans were once painted gold, full of hope and wonder. What has happened to the golden seas that we all once knew? Great Hook! ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
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Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Removed
Poem has been removed.
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Removed #6
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Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: One Night
Hey There ! Returning the favour of your helpful crit :D ~ ! Let's get to it. I don’t know what I am to do, I cannot stop thinking about ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The curse
KAY WELL FIRST OFF I MUST SAY YOUR PROFILE MADE ME LIFE. Favorite Song: Remembering Sunday-All Time Low hahaha, this is actually one of my fave songs too = ] ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: my love .
Hello there ! Welcome to YWS. My name is Tamara. If you need any help, you can PM me anytime = ] Your poem is really sweet. It makes me ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Removed #5
Topic has been removed.
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: Loneliness is like sex
This is seriously beautiful. Enough said. I'd like to hear about how you came up with this. PM me about it if you can.
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: bound to you
life in your absence is but a hazy passing days leave amiss and the pain is longlasting the breath is brief the sweet now bitter frail as a leaf in ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hi there! I'm tennis! You know, I usually dread these types of poems. I think of them as twilight ripoffs, but this one actually wasn't that bad. Let's get to ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Who Am I
Hey there! I'm tennis, come to critique your lovely piece and give you some suggestions! PM for anything! I am a ghost in this world I am everywhere where you ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Not Far From Home
Author's Note: It had to be under 350 words for this contest, so I made ado with what I had. I need ideas for a TITLE because I don't feel ...
Feb 10, 2009
