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This seemed far too tragic to actually be true. The writer of this seemed dark and cold, unfeeling. Yes, I know. World War 2 was a horrible event BUT people ...

Song in My Head A simple tune Plays in my head Over and Over. Of a song Written long ago The words just slip out of my mouth. And as ...

I absolutely loved this piece. I thought it was gorgeous, beautiful, amazing and jsyt plain great! i could see it in a book right now. And also I have nothing ...

I think the verses should be a BITTT longer. Just a bit. I see this as a pop song similar to Bleeding Love by Leona Lewis or Unlove You by ...

I really really enjoyed reading this piece. I thought the theme was creative and clever and you used many words that caught my attention and made the poem have tons ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem It felt like it came truley from the heart. I felt your first verse very strong in emotions but the last line sounded wrong ...

Overall this poem was not bad. However there were also many minor things that just ruined it for me. For example, the repetition of the last line I thought was ...

Very very very very creatively dobe. You can feel the anger and resentment really bubbling up towards I think a mother? On TV you always get this idea of mothers ...

=o=o=o Very surprisinlg good. However I do feel a need for a change of title. The title you have know is uninteresting and BORING! I almost didn't check this poem ...

Not bad... but not great either. Judging from your title, I was expecting something bigger. I didn't get that. I was dissapointed at the length and style of the poem. ...

My response is "Why should we care?" The poem reads like a diary entry; a stream of consciousness, babbling, self-centered. Perfect for a journal, not so great for a poem ...

I like this poem very much. It was excellent. The idea is one I can relate too. However, you do get a little off topic. If this poem is about ...

I thought this would be a very unoriginal piece. Turns out it's very original I like it very much. It could use a little editing but other than that it ...

It seemed like lines from a book. Overall, I liked it very much though. Maybe poems are not your style and that's okay. But this line would really captivate me ...

I didn't understand the beginning at first. But then I understood. Some areas are a little difficult to understand Use simpler words at time.... I hope. Overall, not bad but ...