thewritingdoc

You told me to check it out so here I am. I really like your stuff. Keep writing. :)

Honestly, I didn't think it would flow well but it did. I can't say I didn't like it because I did. In fact I have no critisim. Good job!

All I can say is I thought it was fantastic. Amazing. I loved it. Except "But you have it all the same although." You have it the same although sounds ...

This piece is uhm,, interesting? Hello! I'm Tamara. Anyways, this seemed to be half poem/song kind of a thing and it wasn't bad. You could say I didn't really HATE ...

A Boy sees a girl. The Boy likes the girl. the Girl likes the boy. They kiss. They walk together. They talk to each other. They hold each other. They ...

Beautiful. Well written

Also, whether you did this on purpose or not, you rhymed, and I really liked it. It made these lines stand out. I hoped I helped out some. It's a ...

Aww sweet. Good job :) bud

Another poem by you! I didn't even realize until I saw your avatar. Ahahha. Anyways you're very talented. I also enjoyed this poem very much. Who cares about puncuation? We ...

I am not going to post anything. What a weird thing though. I dislike this kind of poetry because I feel it doesn't come from the heart enough. I mean ...

Not bad. I don't see how it's a poem. Maybe it belongs in other poetry? But it's fairly good. I disliked the topic but the writing was fine. It needs ...

I loved you. I loved you. You were the polish for my toes, But now you're the toe jam. You were the cherry on top of my sundae, But now ...

This poem was beautiful. I felt real pain and suffering while reading it. It wasn't some stupid fake poem like so many of them are. It was written of a ...

I didn't like this line: "days leave amiss" It sounded akward compared to the rest. Finally I found someone who ends their poems properly. !!! I loved this poem overall ...

As they say: "Short and Sweet." :D A good and simple little poem here, but I do have a few suggestions: Song in My Head A simple tune Playing in ...