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Personally, I thought it was in fact NOT cliche. It stayed away from cliche... to me.. The lines I feel a bit uncomfortable with are the part of the sea ...

I love this piece. I think it's good.. The rythm is okay It's not bad I VERY much enjoyed it :)

Honestly, I loved this, It was light and free.. Especially the second line... 8.5/10

Her eyes Piercing through mine (tacky was my first thought on lines 1 and 2) Glowing garnet with rage Menacing and condemning me Pitiless (AHA, however I was wrong. The ...

Well, I live in Ontario, Canada. I know pretty much our life is just like people's in Michigan in the Southern part where I live..

The red wine is gone. Drunk. To the very last drop. The wine is gone. So are the cocktail napkins that I used to blot the wine spilled on your ...

Thanks. I made some spelling erros (woops) that made it seem like I was switching tense. That was accidental. I would like some creative critisim on it. What do you ...

Not just a secret, this was bigger (nice beginning) Blocked out for so long Denying its existence (first 2 lines: I felt the emotion) I lied for months To everyone, ...

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If she ran. she ran from you. (horrible) If she was broken apart; she wasn't broken from the start. (okay...........) You took a knife and shoved it into her heart. ...

I thought thiss poem was good. Not excellent and not bad but good. It seemed less like a poem to me and more like... I don't know how to describe ...

We're friends We talk, We laugh. Walking home from school with you's the best-- You always find a way to put my patience to the test. Still, you make me ...

That's called voice from pictures. We're doing it in school.

I can really relate to this. I enjoyed it soooooooooo much. Except I disliked "Every kiss on the cheek is like knifes cutting my flesh." It sounded akward. Other than ...

Uhm, spam? We don't do things like that on here. Not that I've seen of.