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Re: A maiden's woe
Come hither,oh ye prince charming where art thou lost? thy maiden fair awaits thy coming for thee,she misses most thy sweet face she longs to see in her hands a ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Four Roses
Four roses grew in the hidden glade, Four roses, tall and bright, With velvet petals all adorned. Surrounded by a shining light. The first rose was purest white, rhyming is ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
No problem! If I need help with some story writing, I know who to go to ;]
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
This poem is about murdering my mother...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
Technically, Snow doesn't turn read with blood unless there's heaps and heaps of it in one single spot. But seeing as these things tend to spread out, unless she gutted ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Tennis's Tremendous Reviews!
I'll review anything. Just give me the link and title and I'm on it!
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Will Review Anything!
Poem! I hope you like it
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Please review this for me:
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Removed #4
Topic has been removed.
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: ode to an alienated lover
My god... this is fantastic. I am in love
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: ode to an alienated lover
My god... this is fantastic. I am in love
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: The Earth REVEALED (story written for science in 6th grade)
Sorry about the quick reply but I just wanted to say it reminds me of how I used to write when I was in the sixth grade! Haha
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: it's just the small print
Wooooooooooot! Impressive piece of poetry. I really enjoyed it. Awesome imagery, and use of vocab. The only little thing was in a couple of spots, the flow of the poem ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Hope is a thing with feathers
It's a sweet, little, inspirational piece.
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: The Sharpest Blade
Hi, I'm tennis! Okay, so to start off... the hook was ineffective. In fact, the first stanza was counter-productive. It bored me as a reader due to the lack of ...
Dec 29, 2009
