thewritingdoc

Thanks guys. Honestly, I feel like I need to be TONS more clearer when I'm writing. I'm working on the issue. I'd like more critisim because I sent this in ...

It's actually very good. Some lines really stood out for me but I won't get into that. The ryhming didn't seem forced, which is great. The only problem I have ...

It's actually very good. Some lines really stood out for me but I won't get into that. The ryhming didn't seem forced, which is great. The only problem I have ...

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It's beautiful. I felt your emotions come over me so strongly. I conncted to your ryhmes and lines. Hmm... some poeple say they don't consider this poetry but I do. ...

First off, you make refrence to knives a BITTT much here. I'm not saying it makes the piece horrible because actually I quite liked it, just lay off of repeating ...

I see talent in my crystal ball :P good job

hmmh... hey buddy!!! I decided to give this a gold star :O is it about draco i very much liked it look at my work pally ily ♥

wow,, this was,,,, beautiful in my opinion. It i had to pick one word to describe id pick either beautiful or touching.. it amazed me.. PM me sometime... id like ...

Thank you guys! I'm really shocked that anyone liked this. I'd like to hear more comments on it.

I understand your point of view. Hey, youre a young writer? I was one once too. WHat you need to understand is tht this is very short and undetailed, I ...

I understand your point of view. Hey, youre a young writer? I was one once too. WHat you need to understand is tht this is very short and undetailed, I ...

Muted glints, a sharp flash, (juvenile line... I feel no description or passion in it, not a good begginning.) You’ve sold your life. (this is on okay line but again, ...

The moon will always symbolize this Because it reminds me of you, The pale blank surface like your flawless skin, The giant craters compared to your countless freckles covering your ...

Hmmm... What can I comment except that I am really taking a liking to your work. I find it attracting and emotional and truly from the heart.. I just love ...