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Aha, this chapter was great! Hilariously funny. I liked it. But you might wanna work on your hook is the only thing. It doesnt chatch attention very well. Another great ...

Sweet short poem :) Uhmm,, I think that as you grow as a writer you may want to add more to this and expand. then u cud post it again? ...

Hmm.. not much to say on this. Although I strongly appose on the idea of Harry and Hermione and believe soley in Hermione and Ron and Harry and Ginny, it ...

Cynthia was her name. Some people may argue that those in my profession cannot feel love or that it is easier for us to move on and let go but ...

I liked it. The ryhthm was very unpredictable and hard to detect. I was surprised by what was coming. It flowed overally well and the lines were very emotionally striking. ...

This is gorgeous. BTW, watch out for Vernon. He may be a long time member but he's a real jerk.. I hope he doesn't read this.. Unfortunately he was the ...

This was just amazing. I mean, for the first time, I'm at a loss for words. Hmm... it had the real true street vibe to it and I oculd tell ...

You're chapters just seem to get better and better.. But I can't help but wonder how much of this is written from personal experience? It's amazing writing. I've already expressed ...

Hmmh.. this chapter was much more sensual than the first one. I felt a bit of the sexuality issue in the first chapter but here it really heated up. I ...

Very good, nice exciting piece of writing here. =D Again, I sensed true connection by some of the names and by the way you act. Ahah, I guess I know ...

Wow... I am deeply inspired. Also, I think you are tres coolio. Aha, yay! Another HP fan ;) I am not finding very many on this site.. Thanks for some ...

First off *smacks you* never ever ever ever say you're horrible at anything. I would never consider ay piece of poetry "horrible" as long as it wasn't plagurized or fake; ...

Gah. These are pretty cool. I wouldn't say they are great and I agree that writing may be your better hand but if you enjoy photography and work on it, ...

Ohhh. SO you wrote this. Well, my feelings for this piece here were very very very strong. I absolutely loved it. I thought it soulful and amazing. You put it ...

I feel truth behind it. I hate reading something and knowing it's completely fake and that it in fact doesn't stem from experience at all. This didn't have that. I ...