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Re: letting go
That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: letting go
“God wants to talk to you.” She heard the sweet voice in her mind just as she was about to drift off to dreamland. It was neither angry nor patronizing ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: it's all melted away.
Hey there! I'm Tennis, newly returned long-time YWS-er, after a two year hiatus. Poetry is my specialty, and the title of your piece intrigued me. Thus, allow the reviewing to ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Hunt
Note: It's been a long time since I've written anything of worth. I know this poem is a piece of crap, but I needed to get some feelings out. It ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Complications of Living
Hey! First, I would like to say I'm happy to be back here at YWS after about a two or three year hiatus. The truth is, that I miss writing. ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Removed #3
^ In response to the above, I am writing a lot of short chapters. Besides, that is irrelevant to the point of the story... Some stories have no chapters at ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by an Aspiring Master (Closed)
This is the beginning of my story, Chapter 1: Embrace the End. I don't want to give too much away.. but I'll tell you that it takes place around the ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Reviews by a nut
Hey There! Could you review chapter one of my new novel in the works? I don't have a full title yet, but the title of chapter 1 is Embrace the ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Review first chapter of my novel? Thank you!
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Seems Like Eternity
AWESOME!!! Finally something of yours that I actually liked. I just love your writing, its amazing. Write more soon :)
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Fashion Designing @shubhiloves2write
Did you get the design idea by something you saw in the Hobo section of Wal Mart? Seriously dude, this sucks. Don't design Just don't. :thud:
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Sun Drops
Love it Keep writing :smt003
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Summer 08
I loved it ! Write more SOON !!!! (sarcasm) :xd: :elephant:
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Removed #3
Story has been removed.
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: The Demon Book
A boy found a book this book was a special creation In it was the story of the world And everyone's narrations The intro wasn't bad... but I would change ...
Jan 10, 2010
