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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: letting go

    That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: letting go

    “God wants to talk to you.” She heard the sweet voice in her mind just as she was about to drift off to dreamland. It was neither angry nor patronizing ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: it's all melted away.

    Hey there! I'm Tennis, newly returned long-time YWS-er, after a two year hiatus. Poetry is my specialty, and the title of your piece intrigued me. Thus, allow the reviewing to ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hunt

    Note: It's been a long time since I've written anything of worth. I know this poem is a piece of crap, but I needed to get some feelings out. It ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Complications of Living

    Hey! First, I would like to say I'm happy to be back here at YWS after about a two or three year hiatus. The truth is, that I miss writing. ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Removed #3

    ^ In response to the above, I am writing a lot of short chapters. Besides, that is irrelevant to the point of the story... Some stories have no chapters at ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews by an Aspiring Master (Closed)

    This is the beginning of my story, Chapter 1: Embrace the End. I don't want to give too much away.. but I'll tell you that it takes place around the ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews by a nut

    Hey There! Could you review chapter one of my new novel in the works? I don't have a full title yet, but the title of chapter 1 is Embrace the ...

    Mar 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

    Review first chapter of my novel? Thank you!

    Mar 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Seems Like Eternity

    AWESOME!!! Finally something of yours that I actually liked. I just love your writing, its amazing. Write more soon :)

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Fashion Designing @shubhiloves2write

    Did you get the design idea by something you saw in the Hobo section of Wal Mart? Seriously dude, this sucks. Don't design Just don't. :thud:

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Sun Drops

    Love it Keep writing :smt003

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Summer 08

    I loved it ! Write more SOON !!!! (sarcasm) :xd: :elephant:

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Removed #3

    Story has been removed.

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Demon Book

    A boy found a book this book was a special creation In it was the story of the world And everyone's narrations The intro wasn't bad... but I would change ...

    Jan 10, 2010


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint