thewonderworldofnight

I loved it! The grammar stuff didn't bother me, personally...the way you cut your sentences short really added to the drama, sort of a cliffhanger...the crowbar seemed rather random, but ...

The Adept Racru stood in the center of the room as Riveda and Gwymei entered the chamber. The minor priests stood to one side, acolytes, saji, and novices to the ...

You're not the only one; I'm pretty clueless too. NEWBIES UNITE!!! What kind of stuff do you write?

I didn't have enough room to post this, but MZB is Marion Zimmer Bradley...sorry for the confusion!

I already posted this under Nate's topic so it wasn't readilly viewable, so I'm just gonna paste it here now! Please read, I promise I'm not as dorky as I ...

The Adept Racru stood in the center of the room as Riveda and Gwymei entered the chamber. The minor priests stood to one side, acolytes, saji, and novices to the ...

Okay, I'm new here...I guess you can call me by my username, or by Deoris...although I kinda like being called Deoris better, it's much more personal... I don't really know ...