thewonderworldofnight

Hmmm...I tried reading it a few years back, but maybe I just wasn't ready for it...maybe I'll try it again ;-) Isn't it sad when such good writers die in ...

The weirdest book I've read (and it's and oldie) was the Canterbury Tales. Just weird... Yeah, I'd have to agree with you there...especially the tale of the Wife of Bath ...

I'm so happy! I'm reading this book this year in English class, so it's good to know it won't be a drag! Thanks guys! ~Deoris

It's really funny! Did this come to you out of a dream? It seems to move along in that sort of irregular sequence...and the mystical people added to that as ...

So far, mine doesn't have a title, as the ideas are still a-stirring in my head too much to give me enough time to give it a title. I usually ...

that was really good!!! it was confusing at the beginning. Perhaps you could write more of the scenery, as it wasn't obvious as to where they were. Also, I'm kind ...

Okay, so now i've read your first chapter... a few critiques: 1) the dialogue seems unnatural. Maybe it's just me, but it goes from formal dialogue to slang too quickly ...

okay...i honestly really liked that, and i'm often not the one to be so into romance writing...now i have to start from the beginning and see what happened before the ...

wow...i really liked that, though it was kinda angsty. if you want to title it, perhaps "a lonely lover" (like how Shakespeare didn't title his poems so they just gained ...

okay, so i'm too lazy to go through 10 pages of stuff, so i'm sorry if i'm repeating a past question and wasting your time. how do you get the ...

As I feel that english teachers are not the center of the universe in terms of critiquing writing, I'd post something I wrote here. Enjoy and PLEASE CRITIQUE!!! Sedrae lay ...

I'M THE EXACT SAME WAY!!! like i was writing this thing, and i played it through my head like a bajillion times a day, and then it just seemed wrong. ...

yeah it's a fanfic of Marion Zimmer Bradley's The Fall of Atlantis. It's not a whole, just a piece... thanks for the critique! this has been up for quite a ...

NOOOOO!!! SNAPE!!! DUMBLEDORE!!! Like others said before me, it's beautiful in a sad way... :cry:

The thing is, Ron told Rosie to beat Scorpius (sorry!) in every test and such, so I figured he would basically hint that she shouldn't be friends with him... Anyways, ...