thevoiceinside

Hello Everyone!! I've recently come up with a new story idea and I want to know what you all think of it. It's a first draft so be easy on ...

To me, this piece is only opinion. And that's just fine because everyone has their opinions on different matters. This is a bold subject to speak on and you did ...

I liked it a lot! It's very descriptive and speaks from the heart. However, I would like to see just a little more about the horrid feeling of waking up ...

Thanks for all of your suggestions!! I see your points. I knew it needed a lot more of something, so thanks for clarifying what :) Cheers! -thevoiceinside

I have to disagree with you, Hobbes. It's not a horrible story idea. I think it's brilliant! Everyone has their let downs and their opinions. There's always going to be ...

I liked it :D It's really interesting how you connected with yourself. You're a good writer, although your piece has great potential as well. Your ideas are brilliant! But I ...

I am like a roadway Going every which way Curving, turning and Swerving down lanes I don't know where I'm going Or where I'll end up next I travel through ...