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  • Lyrics Re: Just A Memory - short version

    Hello, I took my song, Just a Memory, and rearranged the lines to form a Sonnet. Enjoy :) -thevoiceinside ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just a Memo

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Three Days

    Hello Fellow Writer, I really liked your song. It's different, yet beautiful. In fact, that's why it's beautiful, because it's different. Waiting on love...what a delicate and most sought after ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I cant answer.

    Hey, I found this interesting. But first of all, it was quite sad. There's a lot of emotion in this though. The meaning and descriptions go deeper than words and ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Just A Memory

    Hello Everyone! I wrote this song in two hours, so be nice on the critque. I hope you enjoy it :D ------------------------------------------------------------------- Just a Memory Three years have com

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Let It Go - first song

    Hey JordanEmert, Nice Job!! I have to say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Everyone starts out not so good and gradually get better and better. Trust me, when I ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Other Re: Read this book!!!

    Hello!! Thanks a bunch! I'll have to look into reading that one. I have heard of it but haven't read it before. I couldn't help but notice your pic. Invader ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Angel, I was always yours

    Hello xGraceex, First of all, I have to say I was on the verge of crying!! It was so beautiful and yet so sad. It looks like I wasn't the ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • NovMo Archives Re: Title Help

    Hello Sketch, I love coming up with title names and names for characters. It comes easy to me, so hopefully I can help you out. It sounds like the "main ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Kissing in the Rain

    Hey! First of all... It's SO DANG CUTE!!!!! :D I'm like "awwww..." Tell your friend that he's a "freakin cool" artist!!! I really really liked this picture :D It reminds ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Somewhere Around Nothing

    Hello, I REALLY liked this. It holds significant meaning. It could be sung, but most poems could be sung as well. Not that they would all sound good, but your ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate

    Hello Nicola! I really liked your poem. It spoke very simply and it seemed heart felt. Don't listen to what people say about it being "cheesey" or "the rhyme is ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sixty Miles

    Hey CoolCatElly! First of all, I really liked reading this. At first I didn't understand it. I then understood when I read your description. But, poetry needs to speak on ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Don't Forget

    Hello Everyone! Here's a song that I wrote. It's about how you shouldn't forget your purpose in life. This song represents what I stand for and holds personal meaning to ...

    Oct 3, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: What the Silence Screams - revised

    Hello fellow writers! I've gone through and edited the preface to "What the Silence Screams". At first, I wrote it and didn't know what kind of story would come out ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: What the Silence Screams

    Hello Jared, GryphonFledgling, Cobra and Bishop!! I know this needs a lot of work! I just wrote it off the top of my head. So I haven't even gone through ...

    Jul 18, 2008


Thomas Edison's last words were "It's very beautiful over there.” I don't know where there is, but I believe it's somewhere, and I hope it's beautiful.
— John Green, Looking for Alaska