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Re: Just A Memory - short version
Hello, I took my song, Just a Memory, and rearranged the lines to form a Sonnet. Enjoy :) -thevoiceinside ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Just a Memo
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Three Days
Hello Fellow Writer, I really liked your song. It's different, yet beautiful. In fact, that's why it's beautiful, because it's different. Waiting on love...what a delicate and most sought after ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: I cant answer.
Hey, I found this interesting. But first of all, it was quite sad. There's a lot of emotion in this though. The meaning and descriptions go deeper than words and ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Just A Memory
Hello Everyone! I wrote this song in two hours, so be nice on the critque. I hope you enjoy it :D ------------------------------------------------------------------- Just a Memory Three years have com
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Let It Go - first song
Hey JordanEmert, Nice Job!! I have to say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Everyone starts out not so good and gradually get better and better. Trust me, when I ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Read this book!!!
Hello!! Thanks a bunch! I'll have to look into reading that one. I have heard of it but haven't read it before. I couldn't help but notice your pic. Invader ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: My Angel, I was always yours
Hello xGraceex, First of all, I have to say I was on the verge of crying!! It was so beautiful and yet so sad. It looks like I wasn't the ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Title Help
Hello Sketch, I love coming up with title names and names for characters. It comes easy to me, so hopefully I can help you out. It sounds like the "main ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Kissing in the Rain
Hey! First of all... It's SO DANG CUTE!!!!! :D I'm like "awwww..." Tell your friend that he's a "freakin cool" artist!!! I really really liked this picture :D It reminds ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Somewhere Around Nothing
Hello, I REALLY liked this. It holds significant meaning. It could be sung, but most poems could be sung as well. Not that they would all sound good, but your ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote for my best mate
Hello Nicola! I really liked your poem. It spoke very simply and it seemed heart felt. Don't listen to what people say about it being "cheesey" or "the rhyme is ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Sixty Miles
Hey CoolCatElly! First of all, I really liked reading this. At first I didn't understand it. I then understood when I read your description. But, poetry needs to speak on ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Don't Forget
Hello Everyone! Here's a song that I wrote. It's about how you shouldn't forget your purpose in life. This song represents what I stand for and holds personal meaning to ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: What the Silence Screams - revised
Hello fellow writers! I've gone through and edited the preface to "What the Silence Screams". At first, I wrote it and didn't know what kind of story would come out ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: What the Silence Screams
Hello Jared, GryphonFledgling, Cobra and Bishop!! I know this needs a lot of work! I just wrote it off the top of my head. So I haven't even gone through ...
Jul 18, 2008
